Dan Bug Wasp – a great job! Your placement of the wasp into the iconic space works well. 1. Congratulations Dan – your work is great and your visualization of graphic ideas is getting better every day. Te blurred tulips and color combinations – although all hot and relative they add contrast and emphasis. Your change in framing as you went through your process has benefited your graphic sensibility. 2. The text works exceptionally well with Buckingham palace - growing out of the flowers. The use of the shadow adds depth. These are postcards in a series – unity of text, unit of concept great placement of wasp 3. The Stonehenge illustration is good but the text is the difficult. The angle and size competes with the image and the wasp is lost.
I like the details in your roughs. It helps paint a good picture of what's to come!
ReplyDeletegreat roughs
ReplyDeleteYour roughs show the thought that went into this project!
ReplyDeleteDan Bug Wasp – a great job! Your placement of the wasp into the iconic space works well.
ReplyDelete1. Congratulations Dan – your work is great and your visualization of graphic ideas is getting better every day. Te blurred tulips and color combinations – although all hot and relative they add contrast and emphasis. Your change in framing as you went through your process has benefited your graphic sensibility.
2. The text works exceptionally well with Buckingham palace - growing out of the flowers. The use of the shadow adds depth. These are postcards in a series – unity of text, unit of concept great placement of wasp
3. The Stonehenge illustration is good but the text is the difficult. The angle and size competes with the image and the wasp is lost.